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alice

Shortiebop (Oct 3, 2006)

i'm getting there slowly :)

4 comments – latest 4:

Aqua (edited Oct 3, 2006)

awww shes a little cutie :] Good one shortiebop, I like the clouds also :D

davincipoppalag (Oct 3, 2006)

The hand and arm look good for that position! You're doin' great!

Shortiebop (Oct 3, 2006)

ty i'm trying my best .... glad you like it...and i love recieving compliments from you you are such a great artist dave :)

davincipoppalag (Oct 3, 2006)

nah..I just pretty much copy pictures from references..not very good at all.. yours are original

mothers love

Shortiebop (Oct 2, 2006)

ran out o f space :(

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davincipoppalag (Oct 2, 2006)

awww sweet Ericka... nice.

Shortiebop (Oct 3, 2006)

ty....dave...:)

elly (Oct 3, 2006)

Awwwww =) This is so sweet! You know, her manicure looks soooo real!! (wish mine looked that nice, I'm way too hard on my hands!) This a really a great drawing! Too bad you ran out of space! =(

davincipoppalag (Oct 3, 2006)

Theyll give you more.. just ask for it.. Copy the picture url ..then send a memo to one of the mods and paste the addy in the memo.. Mods
Marcello..Maiko Hakkai...Zack....that should be enough...theres lots of others

peaceful thoughts

Shortiebop (Oct 2, 2006)

ok need more pointers and ideas

4 comments – latest 4:

Shortiebop (Oct 2, 2006)

lol.....:)

fire_wolf2319 (Oct 2, 2006)

pretty ^^ but you should put a little more in the background

Sweetcell (Oct 2, 2006)

The eye is positioned improperly, this view can be difficult to get. The forehead should sweep normally, where the crook of the nose going to the bridge is sweep the eyelid (the eye lines up in the inner crook of the nose ridge) and push it further back from the front of the face, though not much. And the eye should be more like a sideways v, such as >. The nose is alright but at times the cheek is shown. Sometimes connected slightly with the eye, and covers the corners of the mouth, like so (. And the chin should sweep up to the ear (which most times the bottom ear is even with the end of the nose. And if the ear is shown it would be half or a quarter view. You almost have it, if you just put a thin line from the chin and sweep it up it will show the head and the neck. Like I said it's tricky and I still have trouble with that angle. I hope I explained it well enough (it's always easier to show someone then type it, but this is the net) Again find pictures that show this angle and maybe my words might make more sense.

Getting better Shortie.

Shortiebop (edited Oct 18, 2006)
drawn in 3 min

just something i had to finish because it was taking up space

here we go again

Shortiebop (Sep 29, 2006)

any pointers are welcome

7 comments – latest 4:

Shortiebop (Sep 29, 2006)

ty....Poppa i always accept your pointers :)

davincipoppalag (Sep 29, 2006)

I wish I knew more about what to tell you.. I kinda wing it..(obviously) you should ask one of the figure people what it needs...

Sweetcell (Sep 30, 2006)

It's good, the nose however shouldn't be so broad. We're looking at her from a quarter view so we'd only see her right nostril and the tip of her nose sweeping up towards her brow and connecting to her left eyebrow. Make her eyes smaller and closer together, they're too far apart. Her left eye would be smaller because the nose ridge sweeping up to the brow would show it farther away. And the upper lip would be smaller than the lower lip. As well we should see more of her left cheeckbone. The eyes need to be lowered a touch as well. You have the basics of the body you just need to make the shoulder a little broader thicken the arms a little. I hope you don't take this as a critique just as a means to help. You definately know some anatomy now all you need is to practice and learn how to pull it together. Look at as many refs as you can to know the structure of the human form.

Shortiebop (Oct 1, 2006)

no...thank you all pointers are accepted :)

stupid freakin comp!

KuronekoM1 (Sep 27, 2006)

my comp decided to screw up when I drew this so I have no clue wat it looks like

8 comments – latest 4:

Shortiebop (Sep 28, 2006)

um...weird

KuronekoM1 (Sep 28, 2006)

no your smelling my computer...you made her cry

Shortiebop (Sep 29, 2006)

um....your weird

KuronekoM1 (Sep 29, 2006)

I know thank you I like being abnormal

Untitled

NOVEMBER93 (Sep 22, 2006)

3 comments – latest 3:

senshi (Sep 22, 2006)

iz kool.

April94 (Sep 22, 2006)

your drawings are never as bad as you say they are!

Shortiebop (Sep 28, 2006)

nice :) really good hands and face very proportional :)

pokemon freak

pancakes_rock (Jul 24, 2006)

for all you pokemon fans out dare XD

24 comments – latest 4:

pixelpanda (Jul 30, 2006)

I used to love watching Pokemon ^^;; Its a great picture and you sure are improving a lot!

Shortiebop (Sep 27, 2006)

pancakes....pancakes....pancakes you still at it lol....you will grow up 1 day :)

Maiko (edited Sep 27, 2006)

Pancakes, STFU. Do you want to get banned again?
I SERIOUSLY think you need to stop being so pissy towards people who give you critique and then
insult them because you think you're better..
and you may or may not be better, but your attitude sucks, and really, we don't need people like that around here.
anyway, people are only critiquing you because they want to see you get better, okay? geez.

EDIT: btw, her shoulders are too round/small, and her head is too big, also, she has no ears and her collarbones are too high up and squished together.