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Kouji (Apr 6, 2004)

hello! i'm new here to 2draw, i was just lookin for a place to draw. I haven't quite learned the new program yet, i'm used to paintbbs, but i decided to try it. Well anyway, hello :)

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davincipoppalag (Apr 7, 2004)

Welcome..not bad for a first pic.. Lascaux has some nice features, but if you are used to paint try the Shi Painter one..

DieChan (Apr 7, 2004)

Is that a boy or a girl? Their head is messed up. And the hair should flow down both sides. And that right shoulder is weird lookin. Try to get it to look like the other shoulder. Now that Marcello has left my body, the face looks really good! Nice coloring and shading, BTW.

Kouji (Apr 7, 2004)

thanks for the comment, i'll take all the advice, and try using your sugggestions, thx for welcomming me too!

Practice With BGs

DieChan (Apr 6, 2004)

I was trying out cloudy BGs. The girl was thrown in there for fun. Comment. *back to watching House on Haunted Hill*

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Kouji (Apr 6, 2004)

hi, i'm new herem but i love your picture, very smooth lines! nice cloud bg, and i like your shading!

marcello (Apr 6, 2004)

the background is pretty bad... the problem is your clouds look like blur. if you look at real clouds you'll find they are almost never just white, there is depth, shading, plus even sharp edges and wisps...
the character is alright, but the shading there leaves a bit to be desired. for example, why is the shading on the hair only right next to the neck? it would probably continue for some distance, assuming that is hair coming off her head...